بیا تو انگلیسی بنویس! هرچی بلدی! - ! English Guys! Come Here

[Saba_Baran90]

Mammad gian i'd thank you more than a 1000 times if i could
That was such a beautiful lyric
And i am so glad that you have such an unbelievably beautiful feeling
Dont lose it
And i know you wont

[Saba_Baran90]

Today was hell of a lot worse than i expected
I'm pretty sure it's just me
Cause all the universe cant be so unkind when it comes to understanding how alone some people are
God! I never thought that I'd ever feel so bad about myself
I dont even have the strength to fight anymore
It is so easy fer every body to humiliate me and I feel my world so far away from theirs that i dont even take the time to react, to fight back
It's like I'm a 100 years older than every body else around me
I feel gray, dark gray
The sky honored me by helping me run my harmony of loneliness
It's been a long time now
I find sparks, I stick to them to prove the world that I'm still alive and the more i try, the harder it beats me, hard enough for me to fall on the ground
The more i try to be proud, the more it gets broken
Some days life just sucks(Zendegi gande) like it did today
I watch every body easily having things i dont think I could ever have and the bitter parts is where i dont even know why
Looking around you and feeling the bitter sting of people's words perforating your soul, loneliness scratching you deep enough to make your soul bleed
And it's just to much
When you are only 21 and so good at making people laugh that they all think no further about you than how funny you are
They just wanna be with you so they can laugh and just when you think they like you enough to wanna hear you talking about yourself, to see the tears as well as the laughter, you realize that, that is part of you that no one cares about
No one bothers talking to you without having to ask you yourself about how you feel
Someone told me that i am good at figuring people out, but no one has ever cared enough to figure me out
When some one whom you care about most, tells you that they are the reason why you are alone, it means that they also can tell how alone you are
But it still
....
Never mind. I'm pretty sure it's just me
It's such a nightmare

[مهرگان]

admin, just let me come here sometimes, maybe... one in thousand, just in order to write sth . . .

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once, my dear GolBarg told me that: surely, there is no certainty. . . and i touched it with my fingers, but i have a bad characteristic, i love to be the winner after altercations.... i cannot fail.... but i regret.... that's too bad... i break hearts God may excuse me, or i'd get worse

i love to talk with certanity . . . i love to implement that: just what i say is true, my opinion is the best . . .

oh, every one's in this way ! but not every one knows that this property is very bad. . . while i'm not sure about sth, i don't have the right to say that My Conclusion Is The Best and Every One Has To Follow me. . .

who i am ?

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one experiment of mine: Do Not Trust Friends . . . Friends may leave you soon . . . what remains for you for ever, surely is your family.... right now i said: there is no certainty .... so, is my experiment true?

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someone help me with time. . . i'm getting older, my parents are getting older i can see it with my eyes opened... i dislike new year . . . cuz it brings times that should be passed. . . i don't want to lose these best days of my life . . .

[bigbang]

oh god what girls you are? i just wonder if you guys all the time be sad so when you are happy ?do you know what i mean ! i guess you guys should change some thing in your life because miss mehregan , you and miss saba are the most (zedehal)persons that i have ever seen in my life
i just came here and you two guys killed my mood with your disappointing sentences !
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by the way i feel soooo good
no matter who cares cause i born with this mood
i don,t search for a reason to laugh or to be happy
cause i am a happy person all the time
i just download some clips and one of them is belong to olean university in usa
you know i got to say that there is many things that makes our students diffrent from other countrys students and the most important of them is our sadness
students in iran are looks like Depressed guys that counting days to finish their education and actually they are not make fun with university
besides that i have some friends that they are happy like me truly i got to say. infact some times we are not just happy maybe a little bit crazy! by the way relax guys
take some fun
life is better than you can imagine
and i guess you guys in this term graduated but i have another semester
so who should be sad
i am not ! cause i have my own reason to be happy

[مهرگان]

نوشته اصلی توسط bigbang

oh god what girls you are? i just wonder if you guys all the time be sad so when you are happy ?do you know what i mean ! i guess you guys should change some thing in your life because miss mehregan , you and miss saba are the most (zedehal)persons that i have ever seen in my life

نوشته اصلی توسط bigbang

oh god what girls you are? i just wonder if you guys all the time be sad so when you are happy ?do you know what i mean ! i guess you guys should change some thing in your life because miss mehregan , you and miss saba are the most (zedehal)persons that i have ever seen in my life

mohammad what does it mean ? "what girls you are"?

where is the verb of this sentence of you? "i just wonder if you guys all the time be sad so when you are happy" an "are" is missing

please obey the punctuation rules ! after this sentence a '?' is expected, and also you should say: what do i mean? , not do you know what i mean !

i guess you guys should change some thing in your life
i agree. . .


you and miss saba are the most (zedehal)persons that i have ever seen in my life

نوشته اصلی توسط bigbang

i just came here and you two guys killed my mood with your disappointing sentences !
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
by the way i feel soooo good
no matter who cares cause i born with this mood
i don,t search for a reason to laugh or to be happy
cause i am a happy person all the time
i just download some clips and one of them is belong to olean university in usa
you know i got to say that there is many things that makes our students diffrent from other countrys students and the most important of them is our sadness
students in iran are looks like Depressed guys that counting days to finish their education and actually they are not make fun with university
besides that i have some friends that they are happy like me truly i got to say. infact some times we are not just happy maybe a little bit crazy! by the way relax guys
take some fun
life is better than you can imagine
and i guess you guys in this term graduated but i have another semester
so who should be sad
i am not ! cause i have my own reason to be happy

good for you dear big bang, good luck.
students in iran are looks like please consider the rules bigi ! looks comes after a singular verb ! or this sentence: there is many things. is is wrong ! say: are !

anyway, i entered university in 1389, so my way is the longest! i should be sad !

[bigbang]

about "what girls you are"i want to say What Kind of Girl Are You? but i just forget to say it!



about "there is "i accept with you
but in case:"you what i mean"it is black American language
they use these kind of sentences in their talking and in their music
actually it is a part of American native language
but i agree with you i should use the formal sentences
by the way for this new year i decide to change my operation system from xp to 7 and i have no idea that how much work does it take maybe i am not in forum for several DAYS
i can,t just tolerate xp any more
i should change it T it is soo old
look like an old man

[مهرگان]

نوشته اصلی توسط bigbang

about "what girls you are"i want to say What Kind of Girl Are You? but i just forget to say it!

if you want to say that, you shall say: what kind of girl are you, not you are !




about "there is "i accept with you
what does i accept with you mean? i havn't heard. . .
but in case:"you what i mean"it is black American language
they use these kind of sentences in their talking and in their music
actually it is a part of American native language
but i agree with you i should use the formal sentences

what does 'but in case' mean here?-
black american language means the language which niggers use to speak, doesn't it?-

by the way for this new year i decide to change my operation system from xp to 7 and i have no idea that how much work does it take maybe i am not in forum for several DAYS
i can,t just tolerate xp any more
i should change it T it is soo old
look like an old man

operation system is not true, say: operating system !
say: how much time does it take, not how much work does it take !
soo is wrong, say: so

big bang am getting tired ! emprove your language as soon as possible !

[bigbang]

نوشته اصلی توسط مهرگان

big bang am getting tired ! emprove your language as soon as possible ![/LEFT]

: your mistakes

first : i am getting tired

second :improve
you mean my language skill:third
forth :battling with me
fifth:" how much time does it take, not how much work does it take" i should install the drivers , software's that i use , for new windows
how much work does it take means that i should work on it but i have no idea how much

[مهرگان]

wow !
big bang gian, we are allowed to ignore 'i' in the sentences !
and ignore dictation errors !
how much work is still wrong !

[cz.aria]

hellow guys
happy new year in advance
Mr bigbang i'm looking for a book but i can't find anything
:i would be thankful if u can help me
Solution of Elasticity (Theory, applications, and numerics) Martin H.sadd
and ofcourse u can move this post to its own topic
tnx